Invisible Inkling, by Emily Jenkins,for MMGM

I know Halloween isn’t til next week, but on my new schedule I won’t be posting. So I hope you’ll all forgive me a slightly early Halloweenish post–starting with this very important PSA:

Beware of jack-o-lanterns which develop an appetite for candy! You never know when they’ll sneak into your stash and eat all the treats you planned to give cute little trick or treating kids.


There’s no good outcome when a pumpkin goes bad…so consider yourself forewarned, take the necessary precautions, and have a Happy Halloween from me and mine!

Today’s spotlighted book–Invisible Inkling–isn’t technically a Halloween story, but it felt like a good match to me. I’ll blame it on all the talk about pumpkins, since the ice cream shop which Hank’s parents own is called Big Round Pumpkin, and his new invisible friend has a serious squash craving that won’t be denied. And a Bandapat needs to keep up his strength, you know!

You can (sort of) see Inkling in Hank’s backpack, on the cover, though we don’t learn what Inkling looks like–exactly–til well into the book. Probably in the last third. This is because Inkling is a highly endangered Peruvian Bandapat, and as such is invisible. He’s too cute, you see, so he’d be irresistible if folks could see him. He comes to New York and shows up in Hank’s family’s ice cream shop in search of pumpkins, but his arrival is a lucky thing for Hank because he is about to start fourth grade without the benefit of his life-long buddy and best friend. This catastrophe is somewhat mitigated by Hank having Inkling to distract him at home, since the two quickly become fast friends.

Of course, that leaves Hank to navigate the realm of fourth on his own, and the navigating isn’t going too well. An unfortunate incident in soccer brings Hank to the attention of a school bully, Gillicut, and in the escalating battle between the boys, Hank discovers unpleasant depths within himself as well as unexpected allies and resources in himself.

The story does a wonderful job of balancing the realistic with the fantastic, blending it all together so that it comes to feel that perhaps there really do exist such creatures as Bandapats, and it seems quite reasonable that they would be invisible and consider themselves experts on the lunchroom scene, even if said expert advice backfires more than it doesn’t. I also felt the book did a great job of showing how a persons perception of bullying can shift depending on the lens brought to bear. Not that this book gives good advice to adults or kids on how to handle bullying–because frankly, it really doesn’t–but I did like the way it showed Hank realizing how quickly the ‘bully’ seesaw could shift. That’s not something I see often in middle grades.

Now, let’s get Apricot-kitty’s two cents:

apricot-one-ear-back-mystified“Do you really mean to tell me you have nothing to say about Hank’s father? He was quick enough to scold when Hank crossed the line, at school, but not so quick to help Hank out so the kid stayed comfortably back from the line, was he? I mean…really. Any cat with an attitude like that wouldn’t be worthy of her claws.”





I did mention being unimpressed with how the adults in the story handled the bullying, yes? Well, that’s all I want to say, cause I’m running the risk of dropping spoilers as is. ‘Sides, it’s my view that kids aren’t picking up Invisible Inkling for practical advice, and it does a decent job of illustrating the various things that won’t work, anyway. Oh, yes. And it also brought home to me that I–like my cat–am not a pacifist. And I’m entirely okay with that. 😉

Do you have any fun and not too scary Halloween books to recommend? Do you plan to dress up? I’m on the fence, myself, but will probably throw on a wig or pull something together. Because, Halloween!

For more Marvelous Middle Grade Monday spotlights, reviews, giveaways and interviews, stop by Shannon Messenger’s blog, and happy reading!


For MMGM: What Does the Perfect Middle Grade Novel Look Like?

One week ago I attended the SCBWI Carolinas conference, and had such a great time! It’s been a couple years since I’ve been able to drive down and participate in all three days, and it was great to have the time this year to see (almost) everyone I wanted to see and spend more time both attending panels and catching up. I also made or cemented some great connections within the industry, which is always a win-win! Here’s a pic of me and a couple chums grabbing a late late dinner after closing up the book store.


However, what I wanted to share with ya’ll is a fascinating list that was put together by one of the agents in attendance, Stephen Fraser. He taught a panel which explored what elements the perfect MG novel includes, and I’m sharing both for writers and readers, because I think these books are worth looking at! Here’s a link to the full bibliography (which does include a couple adult novels) that he shared with us, and which I’m sharing with his permission, because my truncated list can’t do justice to them all.

And here’s the shortened list, matched up with a writing strength each book illustrates, as I’ve been able to reconstruct from my notes:

  •  Charlotte’s Web: Masterfully crafted prose. Think about word choices on subsequent rounds and make sure each word belongs precisely where it is.
  • Stone Fox: Drama! Make it real, give it a satisfying twist. Remember you can write about anything (death, etc.) at any reader’s level if you adjust the emotional weight.
  • The Last of the Really Great Whangdoodles: Imagination. Go all out, let the imagination ride high!
  • The Clockwork Three: Don’t be afraid to mix genres.
  • Heart of a Samurai: Bring history to life. Nonfiction can read like fiction when you breath life into the subject.
  • Holes: Use humor. Take extra time in the writing if necessary because humor can take a challenging subject and make it work on additional levels.
  • James and the Giant Peach: Be unapologetic. Don’t try to make your story something it’s not!
  • Junonia: Write to the age level. Write not only to the category but to the interest and ability of the reader.
  • Missing May: Make place a character. Transport the reader so they feel they’ve actually been there.
  • Sarah Plain and Tall: Make each word resonate. Make writing image rich and weighty, like poetry.
  • The Secret Garden: Infuse with joy. At it’s best a book is not overburdened, and joy springs from the pages.
  • Harry Potter Books: Don’t obsess about length.

You’ll get your own mileage from these, and I must confess that I personally don’t plan to set word count guides aside until my books are selling like Harry Potter novels (hey, I can dream, right? :)), but I do think there’s something to be gained by taking a long look at each of these books to see what each can illustrate for us. As a reader, I know I benefit from varying my usual choices, and reading books outside my comfort zone. I know that’s equally true for me as a writer. The more widely I read, the better I’m able to steal and borrow the amazing techniques that are tucked away in these other books!

I asked Apricot-kitty what she thought of the list, but she’s become enamored with storm-watching since Hurricane Matthew went over our heads*, and couldn’t be dragged away to comment. Hopefully she’ll be ready to offer her two bits next week!


In the mean time, head over to Shannon Messenger’s blog for the full round up of Marvelous Middle Grade Monday reviews, giveaways and helpful blogs, and as always, happy reading!



*Honestly, the hurricane didn’t so much pass over our heads as brushed by us. We got lots of rain but were some of the lucky few who retained power, and the kitty’s disdain for rain aside, are doing great!

Bjorn’s Gift, by Sandy Brehl, for MMGM

Several years ago I had the privilege of reading an ARC of Odin’s Promise, and am not ashamed to say that I gave the book one of my more gushing spotlights–which you can read here. At the time, Sandy had no concrete plans to write a sequel, but thankfully she’s done just that and has a third book in the works, as well! Each of the books continues the story of Mari, as she navigates her early teen years during Norway’s time of German occupation, during WWII.

As I waited for the second book–Bjorn’s Gift–to come out I was hopeful and a little nervous. I’d already told Sandy I’d love to have an ARC, but when authors become friends, waiting to spotlight their book can be nerve-racking. No one wants to believe it can happen…but the Sophomore slump is a real challenge. However, Sandy Brehl is a pro so I had faith in her ability to deliver.

And that she has! In Bjorn’s Gift we have a slightly older Mari, who is more confident in herself, but struggling with the challenges that arise when her deep-seated loyalty to the resistance movement is pitted against her friendship with a classmate, who has joined the Norwegian Nazi party. She’s also got bigger secrets to keep, many of them of a highly dangerous nature. The war has taken a toll, hunger has spread, and their German oppressors are turning up the heat on loyal Norwegians.

But despite all that, Mari’s family and closest friends manage to celebrate together during joyful times, and laugh together even when things are rough. I was continually amazed by the close comfort and deep love that permeates the story and brings a warmth and lightness to a very dark time in Norwegian history. There’s even an adorable Spitz pup, which we met at the end of the first book. He needs help from Mari in this one if he’s to safely grow up. And who wouldn’t love an adorable Spitz?


I know there’s a tendency on my part to gush over these books, but believe it or not, I’m holding back! On finishing them, I feel the urge to go out and shove them into the hands of random strangers and scream ‘Read this! You have to read this!’ in their faces. The only thing holding me back? I’m not willing to give up my copy.

Oh, fine, okay…that and I suspect I’d be hauled off to jail! However, the books really are that good. They maintain an amazing balance between the historic details needed to accurately portray the times and culture, including the darkness and fear of the day, against the inherent hope of a young, happy, and strong-willed girl growing up surrounded by her loving parents and sweet Bestemor (Grandma). I believe these books would make an excellent addition to any home, school, or library, and that they are uniquely able to appeal to both the shy, quiet readers who may struggle with more painful accounts of this time period, as well as the rowdier readers who want to sink their teeth into danger and adrenaline.

Now…let’s see what Apricot-kitty has to say:

Apricot kitty shadow and light“I liked the clever way Mari and her sister used the medicines they had available. Very cat-like, that. I also liked the secret place Mari finds, and the one her father creates, as well. Bolt holes are always good, and doubly so in a time of war. A very savvy family!”





I could explain those cryptic remarks, but I’m not big on spoilers, so we’ll let her comments stand as they are. Trust Apricot to see the shadow and light of each situation, and bring that out in true cat form! The book is on pre-release right now, but I’ve seen some goodreads giveaways so if you add it to your shelf, you could be notified and have a chance to win. I hope you do, as it’s a lovely read!

Stop by Shannon Messenger’s blog for further Marvelous Middle Grade Monday reviews, spotlights, interviews and giveaways, and happy reading!




The Red Pyramid, by Rick Riordan, for MMGM

I have to give a huge hug of thanks to my fellow MMGMers for nudging me to give Rick Riordan another try. I was underwhelmed by the first Percy Jackson book. Didn’t hate it, definitely saw its value on the MG shelf, but didn’t care for Percy’s voice and found the plot (or lack thereof) exasperating.

And never got around to reading another Rick Riordan book–until now. Thankfully I picked up a copy of The Red Pyramid as one of my summer reads, and was suitably impressed!

This is the story of a brother and sister who’ve grown up mostly apart from each other, in two totally different worlds. Sadie’s grown up with her grandparents in London, and thoroughly absorbed the British culture of her chums at school. Carter has traveled the world shadowing their dead, and his education has been much less conventional. But when their dad tries to put right the terrible tragedy that killed their mom, the two are thrust together and quickly come to rely on each other as they try to stay one step ahead of the looming disaster that is their parents’ inheritance. All while hosting Egyptian gods, and attempting to save the world, of course!

So, what did I love about this book? For one, the honest and frank way that race is addressed. Carter takes after their dad, and has known for years that he needs to handle himself extra carefully because his dark skin, curly black hair, and African looks will attract the wrong kind of attention if given half a chance. Moreover, since Sadie is blonde (under the streaks she likes to dye) and light skinned–taking after their mum–the two are often frustrated by people doubting that they can be siblings, or ‘real’ family. The book isn’t about race, per se, but packs a powerful punch perhaps because of that. The Kane kids are just trying to get on with their already complicated lives, but the issue of race isn’t going to politely step aside just because they have more pressing things to attend to.

For seconders (that’s a word, right?) I love the depth of world building in the story. Sure, Riordan was tapping into Egyptian history and mythology for all his stuff, but I’ve taken university level classes that addressed/were focused on Egyptian history, and there was still a fair amount of world building needed for him to gather all this random stuff and pull it into one cohesive whole. And that’s before you even get to the way he modernized the gods, and gave depth to the magicians both past and present. Truly amazing work, with lots of fun nuances for those of us with a little understanding of Egyptian mythology.

For thirdishes (okay, I just made that one up!) the book does an excellent job balancing pacing and the switches in pov. Is this something most readers are going to geek out over? No, not likely. But it’s brilliantly done! It’s hard–hard–to write a book in two povs without sacrificing anything by way of voice and while also never giving the reader mental whiplash. By framing the book as he did, Riordan allowed for much more streamlined shifts in pov, and gave himself a leg up on pacing, as well. All in all, I felt the balance of information and action was excellent, and the book brilliantly crafted.

There’s more to love, but we’ll go with those. 🙂 And now…for Apricot-kitty’s take:

IMG_1001 (2)“Well of course I liked Bast, because who wouldn’t? However, I felt she got rather the short-end of the story. And I’m also not buying that she’d run from any dog-like creature, no matter how supernatural. I’ll bet that was put in there just so the Kane kids could shine without her. After all, they were the ones telling the story, weren’t they?”





Thank you, Apricot-kitty for reminding me of the excellent supporting cast of characters in The Red Pyramid. Bast is amazing–definitely someone you should take along, if ever you go adventuring–but even the bad guys were wonderfully fleshed out and the conflict nuanced. Each voice rings out clear and individual, adding layers of interest. For any Riordan-hesitant readers, I say go forth and read! 😀

For more Marvelous Middle Grade Monday reviews, spotlights, interviews and giveaways, stop by Shannon Messengers blog. Next week I’ll be blog-silent, but I’ll be back on the 19th with a spotlight on Bjorn’s Gift, and I hope to see you all here. In the mean time, many thanks for stopping by, and happy reading!



The End of the Alligator Days

Hello, dear friends! How was your summer? Mine was lovely–all that I hoped it could be, and soo restorative! I am energized and enthused and ready for the writing and editing projects of the fall. Plus the fun of faires and festivals, pumpkin days and crisp leaves raining from a clear blue sky. I love all the seasons, but fall is my favorite.

And you guys–I’m so excited for this fall! I have some really lovely books I’m editing–I’m always proud of the Red Adept books I’ve helped to shape–and in a giant SQUEE I have a tidy pile of fulls out with agents, for Once Upon a Witness! That’s my fairyland’s witness protection MG, which I think I’ve mentioned before. And then there are a couple editors reading a different MG and a PB, plus all the work and planning that’s already begun for the launch party of my romantic suspense, which will debut spring of 2017–link for all my Lily Black news here. The writing life? Right now it’s da’ bomb. 😀

But all that positive activity does bring one shift. I will be moving my Marvelous Middle Grade Monday posts to an every other week schedule, just to ease things up a bit. I’ve resisted making this shift for at least a year, but the time has come and so I sympathise with the likes of Marvin K. Mooney but must relent. There will be possible posts on the off days, of course, plus the occasional switcheroo to make room for holidays (December, I’m looking at you) but pretty much we’ll stick to that every other Monday schedule.

And now I have a couple books to recommend! A shout out for two YA books I read over the summer:


I really haven’t read Young Adult much, over the last few years, and when I did it was usually the stuff that could pass as MG. So…I’d kind of mentally consigned YA to the category of ‘great, if you like that angsty stuff and want to read something depressing.’ I cringe, admitting it, but given the reputation it has and the dark, fatalistic bend of some of the books, that was my perspective. But these two books took my preconceptions and scrambled them up like a rubix cube in the hands of a three-year-old, then straightened them all out in a new and beautiful pattern. Yes, they were (both) sometimes angsty, and moody. But there was so much of light, and hope, in each of them! Moreover, the writing was so gorgeous and the characters so sympathetic, reading never felt like it brought on the blues.

The Lost Sun is a tale of sacrifice and heroism in the face of overwhelmingly difficult circumstances. It’s set in ‘the United States of Asgard’ where the Norse Gods and the old Norse way of life has been brought to the Americas, and coincides comfortably with our modern world of cars and television. This juxtaposition provides a mythological framework within which the main character–a young berzerker–must deal with the fact that his father is infamous for having berzerked…in a shopping mall, completely losing it and killing something like a dozen people before he was taken out by a police squad. So the main character attempts to prevent himself from ever becoming a berzerker, holding it back and clamping down on who he is. And then there’s a girl, whose mother is as famous as his father was infamous, and a beautiful, fragile lost god, and a road-trip style quest…and I recommend you read it!

The Fault in Our Stars is much better known, given its bestseller status, but it’s interesting because I could also say of it that it’s a tale of sacrifice and heroism in the face of overwhelmingly difficult circumstances. Cancer, of course, and terminal. I won’t say much more of this one–it’s so famous, and others have said it better–but I will say that it was soo much more hopeful than I thought it would be! The first few chapters were more what I expected, and I might have stopped reading if I hadn’t been curious how John Green was going to pull off a plot when we know up front that the main character is living on borrowed time and has no future. But as the story progresses it lightens, and you come to realize that all we need is a now. After all, which of us, through any act of will or sacrifice, can get anything immediate and useful now, out of our future? Can pin any part of it down? The future doesn’t have a debit card, so you can pull up to a metaphysical ATM and borrow a bit of whatever it is you want. All any of us possess in a concrete way is a past, which we can’t change, and a now. That wasn’t the point of this book, but it was a side bit of insight which I appreciated. Truth, the book had layers within layers of insights, and was brilliantly done.

So, there’s a couple books for you, as my little gift from summer’s alligator days! Please do tell me what you’ve been up to, and what your in-book or out-of-book summer adventures were! I’m dying to hear them. 😉

Z and alligator baby 2016 Surfwatch

Me, and a friendly baby alligator I met at the beach. He was super soft and cuddly…so long as he sported that bit of tape around his jaws!

Summer Break Hiatus!

I will be on a blogging break the remainder of the summer, aside from the occasional pop in for news or updates. My travels will almost span the continent, and include plenty of adventures in and out of books. 😀 I look forward to seeing you all in August!


Have a beautiful, glorious summer, and happy reading!

Odd and the Frost Giants, by Neil Gaiman, for MMGM

Before I get to my spotlight, I want to give a huge shout-out to all the great dads out there!  Sure, Father’s Day is over…but I think we can spot them one more day. 😉  And to that end, I’m going to share a snippet of a story I read on Neil Gaiman’s blog a billion years ago.  I read it back in the day when there were about two blog/journals online, and one of them was his.  And I’m pulling this from memory, so if Neil is reading my post (haha) he’ll have to step in and correct any details I get wrong.
So, at the time his youngest daughter was older elementary school aged, or maybe heading into middle school.  And on the wall in the halls of her school, there was a picture of Neil Gaimon–her dad.  And one day perhaps feeling under the magnifying glass or maybe embarrassed, she took a marker and colored a mustache on her dad’s poster face, or maybe drew glasses.  I don’t remember which.  The school contacted him kind of embarrassed and looking for direction, and Neil instantly smoothed things over and stood by his daughter being a kid whose dad has a poster on her wall at school, rather than a student defacing the image of a famous author on school property.  Then he shared the story (which I’ve probably butchered) on his blog, because he was highly amused by the incident and just chuckling about it.  I remember thinking how much this represented why Neil Gaiman is so likable–that even though he’s wildly talented and decently famous and could put on airs if he wanted to, no way would he ever do that.  Especially where his child was concerned!
So, here’s to all the dads out there, whether they be famous or not, who roll with the nonsense their kids dish out and live to tell the tale.  You’re awesome!


And that makes a decent intro to this week’s spotlight because:
a) it’s one of Neil Gaiman’s books!  Wild coincindence, that! lol
b) on the surface this story is about gods and heroes and legends, but underneath…it’s also about family, and a kid living true to his father’s legacy.  And I simply loved it!

Here’s the cover for Odd and the Frost Giants, which is pretty gorgeous in its own right:

Odd and the Frost Giatns cover

And you see there Odd, riding on Thor’s back, with Odin kind of behind them, and Loki beside them.  Of course, they’re not looking quite like themselves, and that’s Loki’s fault and a driving plot point in the story.  You see, the Frost Giants have gotten hold of Thor’s hammer, taken over Asgard, and banished the gods into these animal forms down on Midgard.  In order to help them, Odd must show courage, ingenuity, and tenacity, as he overcomes the challenges his crippled leg presents in the frozen world he lives in, and pushes past the limitations others would place on him because he’s only a boy, with a bad leg, and an annoying one at that.

It’s not a super long, twisty story, so I won’t say much about the plot.  Just that I loved how the story elements were mined and reused, so the solution flowed organically from the character’s original problems.  You’ve probably heard me talk about that before…and I hope you won’t tire of it.  I simply love a well plotted book, that grows like a beautiful tree, from the strength of its own roots!  It makes my content-editor heart sit up and sing. 🙂

I also really appreciated that though Odd’s circumstances have evolved by the end, who he is fundamentally has grown but not been abandoned.  The problem of his leg being crushed, which happens at the beginning of the story (almost as pre-story), is a situation which shows you what kind of person Odd is, and the things which make him who he is are not entirely ‘fixed’ at the end.  I love that, as too often heroes are seen as becoming less themselves instead of more truly who they are in the process of overcoming their problems.  And, in a story which has as its focus a boy who requires a crutch to get around, I think acknowledging the strength which he has within his circumstances is especially important.

So, that’s cool.  And of course, Neil’s writing is as fluid as ever.  One of the things I love about his books which I love–admitting that he’s written a couple which didn’t work for me–is that you always have the feeling that each word was placed just so, because it was the right word to go there.  He doesn’t do any of this toss-it-together-and-see-what-shakes-out stuff that so many writers do!  Since I write super fast and suspect I fall in the later category of shake and bake writing, I appreciate the precision he uses and find joy in reading not only his stories, but the words within those stories.

Now, let’s see what Apricot-kitty thought of it:

Apricot Headshot squinting“It made my hungry.  For salmon.  Do you suppose they ever ate anything else?  Also, those gods were generally not terribly bright, and are lucky their enemies weren’t any smarter.”





Mmm, salmon.  You know, I think that may be what’s for dinner!  As for the gods, I kind of got the feeling they were letting Odd handle this one, but the story reasons that could be the case held together for me.  It may have been just a stretch that all Asgard came to a grinding halt, and that only Odd could fix it…but not much of one.  In truth, when this story is set beside the rest the Norse myths, it’s even more believable, because most those tales are pretty far-fetched.  And in the end, it’s the word pictures and deeper resonance of this story that stays with you, not the probability of the plot.

For more Marvelous Middle Grade Monday reviews, spotlights, interviews and giveaways, stop by the blog of our host, Shannon Messenger.  And happy reading!



An Authorial Survival Guide to the Submission Roller Coaster

How do you do amusement parks?  Are you someone who dashes from one roller coaster to the next, or would you rather watch the stroller and bag while you munch your hot roasted almonds?  If you’re an author, you will find yourself repeatedly tossing aside your cotton candy and climbing on the submission roller coaster, whether you want to or not.


Here’s a few tips for how to survive the ride, adapted from something that I wrote up for a former agency sister a few months back, when she was first heading out on submission and feeling a bit green about it.  You could say I’ve become a bit hardcore on this roller coaster thing, seeing as how I queried agents for 2-3 years before signing with my first agent, and then endured 2+ years of submissions with her, only to part ways with that agent and–now–once again climb on the querying roller coaster!  I’m thankful that I do have one book (my romantic suspense) under contract, so I can remind myself that this whole topsy-turvy thing really can produce books!

If you want to come out with a fierce grin on your face and avoid the dreaded green splatter, these are my suggestions:

1–Ever notice how much easier it is to scream and wave your hands on a roller coaster when other people are doing it, too?  This applies to submissions, as well!  Find other authors in the same stage you’re at, or only a little further down the path.  They can be a bit hard to locate, but having a group like that to hang out with socially is great, because the challenges you’re facing now go way beyond needing help with a manuscript and are hard to explain to someone who’s not in the profession or at this point yet.  Picture this conversation:
Friend: “Hey, you look a little tired.  How are you doing?
Author: “Doing good, but got another glowing rejection today.”
Friend-who-doesn’t-have-back-story: “Oh, um, is that bad?”  To which the author tries to explain that a glowing rejection can be a good thing, because hey, it’s glowing and the editor really wanted it!  But of course also stinks, because, rejection!
OR Friend-who’s-been-there: “Oh, man!  Those stink!  They’re so bitter-sweet, you know?”
And Author feels heard and has warm feelings of being understood.
See how helpful that can be?  So, try to find your tribe of authors in the same stage or one similar to where you’re at.  If you can’t find an in person group, see if you can spot one online.
BONUS, because this particular section of the roller coaster has steep curves and someone just lost their hat: Once in awhile, remind yourself of all the rejections that world famous bestselling authors received.  I know, I know!  This will feel like an indulgence, and maybe a tad narcissistic since they’re all so amazing and you’re just you.  But you know what?  They were noobs once, too, and setbacks happens to the best of us.  A little reminder that rejection is part of the process, and not a value statement of your book can really help you survive those sharp turns.


2–Promise yourself you’ll buy that cute little stuffed unicorn if you get on the ride and don’t jump off in the middle.  Why the reward?  Well, you’d celebrate if you got a contract, right?  Probably show up at the nearest ice cream store and tell everyone you were buying a round, sprinkles and extra toppings galore!  But when you’re riding the submission roller coaster, getting a contract is beyond your control.  In fact–and this is important–the moment where you get a contract is actually a reflection of all the many things you did right up to that point.  That’s so crucial to understand that I’m going to bold it and repeat it–the moment where you get a contract is actually a reflection of all the many things you did right up to that point!  So instead of waiting and buying everyone in town a giant banana split when your contract finally comes (!!!), isolate those things you did right/will do right to get there, and as you go forward, reward yourself in bite-sized pieces for taking those steps.  This can be tricky, because day-to-day life makes it hard to find the rewards, or make time for them, but it’s an important promise to yourself that you will get there.


3–What about that writing thing you’re supposed to be doing?  How does that fit into this roller coaster riding?  Well…you’ll spend a lot of time standing in line.  And when you’re doing that, it’s tempting to focus entirely on how nervous you are about the roller coaster, and how you hope this time you don’t cry and you’ll be brave enough to lift your hands.  But you’ve got to take your mind off the roller coaster and focus on your next book.  Remember, writing a book is how you got where you are.  It’s how you’ll get to the next stage, and the stage after that, and so on.  So, one of your daily things you get rewarded for (like the fluffy unicorn, above) should be writing, revising, and working on the next book.
BONUS because this is the part where your stomach falls out of the bottom of the world: If you’re ever feeling blocked, or having a hard time working on the next project–right after a rejection, for example–try telling yourself that this new manuscript is just a writing exercise, for you and a handful of trusted friends.  Definitely try not to dwell on the rejection process while writing, since that can really stink up the creative process.  Shelter this book as much as your heart requires.  It will get its turn out in the world, but right now it’s a baby and needs to be nurtured.


4–What about those pics they take?  Should you go look at yours, and allow everyone to see how silly you looked?  Because it seems like that will just make working on the new project so much harder.  Well, this is the part where you have to use your own judgement.  ‘Going to look at roller coaster pics’ in our analogy is attending writing workshops, classes, and reading books on how to help you grow as a writer.  There can be times when you’re riding your roller coaster that you can’t face the crowd gathered around the pics, and sometimes its okay if you simply slink off and curl up with your new book baby.  However, if you’re noticing a pattern in your rejections…for example, they mention repeatedly that the editor couldn’t quite connect with the story, that might be a description problem, or might mean the information flow was off.  And the books and workshops can help with that!  Or, the editors might all be saying that they struggled to find the pov character sympathetic, and hooray, that’s also something you can improve in!  So addressing these issues can help you feel confident as you move forward with your next project, and of course help you grow since we should always be improving as writers.


Riding the submission roller coaster can be hard.  But the good news is, you’ll get better at it!  Just give yourself a little love, and recognize it for what it is–a temporary time in your career, which will bring great rewards if you’ll just hang in there!  Think of it this way…the only way to truly fail at riding roller coasters is if you refuse to ride.
That’s my advice–to you and to me, as well!  What tips or tricks have you found to be useful?  Share them in the comments, as I’m always happy to learn!
IMG_0993 (1)Oh, and Apricot-kitty?  She says we’re all trying too hard.  We should sit back, relax, and let life come to us.  It’s the cat way, and therefor the best way.  But while we’re here, we can leave the ice cream by her bowl.
For the Marvelous Middle Grade roundup of posts, interviews, reviews, spotlights, and giveaways, stop by Shannon Messenger’s blog!  And happy reading and writing! 😉

Neverseen, by our very own Shannon Messenger, for MMGM

I didn’t get spotlights in on the middle books, but if you want to see my thoughts on book one in the Keeper of the Lost Cities series, you can see that spotlight here.  As for Neverseen, I pronounce it a smashing success!

This is important to note, because some of the teen readers in my life were less than thrilled with Everblaze.  In fact, my daughter was lukewarm on whether she wanted a hard copy of Neverseen or would accept (gasp!) her first paperback in this series.  However, her friends who’d already consumed it reassured her, a hardcover was acquired, and eventually she stopped re-reading it and I was able to get my hands on it.  So, let it be known–if you were disappointed with Everblaze, you will not be with Neverseen!

So, what are my thoughts on this fourth book in the series?  Well, for one thing, I think Shannon did a marvelous job of dovetailing the plot arc and character arcs, which is probably a large part of why the book is so good.  For a fourth book in a series, which has been acquiring new characters and picking up extra plot points with each additional book, this is no small thing!  In my day job as a content editor, I work with authors on series and it’s HARD to nail that balance!  I also think this book did the best to date of taking the series themes and fully exploring them within the arc of the individual book.  In Neverseen, the questions which have been raised as to why the Elvish society should be the de facto rulers of the intelligent races, and whether their lofty ideals are truly realized within their own social circles were fully explored through the action and plot.  We also got some great insights into the Neverseen organization, and how they in many ways mirror the goals of the Black Swan, albeit going after those goals in a very different way.  Both groups recognize the need for change, and both are working to accomplish that change by shaking up the status quo from the inside out.

But, on reading over the above…I do believe I’m making the book sound boring!  I can promise that my daughter and her friends are not geeking out over this book because they love the layered effect of the various societal problems, and the way those issues are echoed through the plot.  So, what specifically did I love?  Well, we finally get to see inside the ‘bad kid’ school, Exillium, which I’ve been curious about from the beginning.  And it did not disappoint!  In fact, it made me wonder why the elves haven’t forged an army from these kids, because that could be a thing.  We also get to see what I can only call water bending (anyone out there fans of Avatar: the Last Airbender?) and also learn about shades, which are elves who can use their shadowvapor in creepy and cool ways.  Additionally, we have some fantastic reveals and a couple new kids join the team, to epic effect.  Let’s see…what else can I share without totally ruining it for you…fire fighting fire.  A sweeping, city crashing wave.  Tree houses.  Dinosaurs which scream a cyclone hole in the ocean, by way of travel.  Traps within traps.  Flying shoes.  And–argh!  The rest would definitely count as spoilers.

I will say just one thing more.  There was one reveal which I’ve seen coming since book one (being way too good at predicting these things) and another that I suspected for a couple books now.  However, there was another twist which I found deeply poignant and did not see coming at all.  It was the kind which will stay with me, however, and made for such a beautiful capstone to the book that I suspect it will always be associated with this series.  Lovely, truly lovely.

And, that brings us to Apricot-kitty’s thoughts:

IMG_1001 (2)“I liked the pajamas the teens wore, when they stayed in the tree houses, and I still love Mr. Forkle.  He’s got the heart of an elf, tenacity of a human, and wisdom of a cat.  However, I did not like all the time they spent holding their breath in the water, and I could do without ever again seeing everblaze fire, as well!”




Did you all notice how she took my entire blog post and summed it up in one short paragraph?  Times like this…I suspect she’s trying to make me look bad.  But then again, maybe she can’t help it, cause she is a cat. 😉

For more Marvelous Middlegrade Monday posts, spotlights, reviews and interviews, stop by Shannon Messenger’s blog.  And, happy reading!


Happy Memorial Day–from me and da Strawberry Man!

Memorial Day is about looking back, and honoring all those who’ve sacrificed their lives so that our freedoms and way of life can continue–and that’s something I wholeheartedly support!


But, it’s also an excellent time to look back on our own lives, and on our year.  It’s not quite the mid-point of the year, but there’s still been a lot of space between us and those January goals we made.  All the way back to January…it seems such a long time ago!  This entire year to date has felt a bit like that, for me.  Super busy, great creative energy, but I’m pleased to say I’m still on target for my major goal this year to hit 366 written or revised words.  And that feels great!

So, I’m going to share with you a little video about my friend Strawberry Man that I created approximately five years ago.  Hopefully it will provide a laugh, but I mostly want to celebrate the joy of creativity–in my life and yours. 🙂

Happy Memorial Day!